From day one,
Every single movement right from moving from a men to women,
The later giving the place to nourish, freedom to grow,
Though u suck from inside her and outside,
The former melting all his physical and mental to mould thee,
Thy taking a few days to blink, to search around, to identify, to hold the fingers,
to hear the sound and to make sound, to interpret, to smile ,
to cry when thy has to for getting what thy want,
to get trained the physic as well as psych,
to learn externally, internally,
to know geography, history, science and of course maths and art,
Identify one of the above colors that would suit thee,
make it more shiny, tremendous, and finally to sell it,
can call it as intelligence, some as intuition, as sacrifice too sometimes,
a few declaring it as luck as well,
in between there comes the melting love,
love – same love in different shapes and size,
of course physics is part of everything,
few love is short, for a few its tall,
sometimes its thin and sometimes its fat,
praising it when it making u smile and
crying when its broken,
resting a while in this phase with a smile or a silence,
then run again run,
what thy come is half the travel,
run again run,
speeding and the speed breakers are common,
may be the ratio differs from thy to thy,
ups and downs again thru the same speed and speed breakers,
reaching down the place to stop,
run and rest, watching the same cycle,
of different souls,
now from a longer distance,
its the time to rest finally for one and all,
thus ending every thing as the part of altogether.
once again the composition of five will be divided into five.
telling Every thing is part of Altogether….
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Comment by dolby — November 27, 2008 @ 12:00 pm
Karthi,
nee peeriya arasiyalvaathi ya varuveee…
yaarukumee puriyaama kavithayaa peesuree, kanidpaa 2012 la nee thaan pinlaandthu janaathibathi…
Comment by Sarav — December 2, 2008 @ 12:55 pm
now i understood why u were asking about thee and thy
Nice composition da, nicely scripted
Comment by vivek — January 6, 2009 @ 3:17 pm
Thanks da …I was wondering if someone else could also understand
Comment by karthicks — January 12, 2009 @ 12:27 am